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Mona Messine

Manuscript Diagnosis | Novel Proofreading

€625/day
3 projects
Paris, FR
8-15 years

Average response time: 12 hours

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About Mona

You have finished your manuscript… but you don't yet know if it's ready to be sent to publishers?

That's precisely where I come in.

A published writer, editor, and teacher, I have guided over 215 authors in writing, rewriting, and completing their texts.

My job: to provide you with a professional, demanding, and benevolent editorial eye, in order to reveal the full potential of your project.

I offer two formats of support:

• Editorial Consultation (1 hour, €150):

Do you need an initial look at a novel, a life story, an essay, or a book project? We discuss your text, its strengths, its weaknesses, and the next steps to consider. You will leave with a concrete action plan.

• Complete Editorial Diagnosis of Your Manuscript:

In about a day (depending on the volume), I perform an in-depth reading of your text.

At the end of this service, you will receive:

✔ an annotated manuscript;
✔ a detailed editorial diagnosis;
✔ recommendations on structure, pacing, characters, style, and narration;
✔ a restitution video conference.

My goal is not to rewrite your book for you, but to offer you the external perspective every author needs before a new version or submission to a publishing house.

I also support authors with:
  • manuscript restructuring;
  • personal and professional narratives;
  • writing coaching;
  • book projects;
  • theses and academic papers.
I have notably collaborated with Les Mots, P.O.L., Les Escales, the Prix Goncourt des Lycéens, Livres Agités, ELLE, and LVMH.

Authors I have supported are published by Gallimard, au Seuil, and Les Nouveaux éditeurs.

Each text has a unique voice. My job is to preserve it while giving it the best chance of success.
  • French

    Native or bilingual

  • English

    Native or bilingual

  • Spanish

    Conversational

  • Portuguese

    Conversational

  • Italian

    Basic

Can work on-site
Paris (up to 50km), Marseille (up to 50km), Bordeaux (up to 50km), Rennes (up to 50km), Nantes (up to 50km)

Experience

  • mona messine writings
    Founder, Editorial and Literary Director
    EDUCATION AND E-LEARNING
    February 2013 - Today (13 years and 6 months)
    Paris, France
    Literary Coaching: manuscript support, correction of ~60 manuscripts, identification of literary forms, creative experiments, assistance with publisher selection, literary advice, private coaching.

    Stylistic and structural improvement of texts. Proofreading of novels and narratives, novel correction.

    Publishing support.

    Leading thematic literary workshops and creativity coaching. Producer of creative writing workshops. Writing training materials and workshop content on storytelling, creativity, narration, stylistics, and content simplification. Manuscript composition assistance.

    Editorial assistance, direction of content projects or literary projects, media identification. Ghostwriting for entrepreneurs & artists: speeches, value charters, portraits.
    Pen Project Management Editorial Strategy Art Direction Communication Strategy
  • Les Mots
    Head of Manuscript Department
    ARTS AND CRAFTS
    January 2023 - July 2023 (6 months)
    Paris, France
    Reception and reading of manuscripts for a writing school: workshop participants and new prospects.
    Proofreading, correction. Writing reading reports, video interviews. Comprehensive feedback on structure, style, the text's core message, and publishing possibilities.
    Support for 20 novels per month, life stories, poetry, thrillers, autofictions.
    Proofreading and Correction Manuscript Reading manuscript novel Narration
  • Bibliothèque de Paris
    Client Project Manager
    CULTURE
    August 2022 - November 2022 (4 months)
    Paris, France
    Creation of user journeys and redesign of communication channels.
    Design of training courses and editing of training guides.
    Definition of customer service policy within the library.
    Procurement reference.
    Writing and creation of writing processes for website and guide redesign.
    Project Management Editorial Strategy Copywriting Copywriting Training

Reviews

5.0

Out of 2 ratings

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Élodie

Relecture de manuscrit - Élodie FUENTES

Reviewed on 7/6/2026

I had the pleasure of entrusting the proofreading of my manuscript to Mona, and I can only recommend her wholeheartedly. Her work was of remarkable quality: an extremely precise, detailed, and relevant feedback, with numerous observations that allowed me to improve my text in depth. One can feel that she truly takes the time to read, to understand the author's universe, and to provide constructive comments, always with great kindness. I particularly appreciated her involvement, her rigor, and the clarity of her explanations. Every remark was argued and useful, which is very precious when working on a manuscript. A huge thank you, Mona, for your professionalism, your availability, and the care you took with this assignment. I will not hesitate for a second to call on you again and to recommend you to other authors.
N

Nicolas

Limpide

Reviewed on 5/17/2021

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Education

  • Creative Writing
    Les Mots
    2020
  • Sciences Po - International Business
    IEP Aix-en-Provence
    2013

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